Inspirational Quote

Inspirational Quote

Sunday, 16 March 2014

writing a climax

Kingi couldn't hang on much longer. Snow was everywhere as the avalanche went on and on. His fingers would let go soon and he would fall off the cliff, thousands of metres down the mountain. A hand took hold of his and stopped him falling. He looked up and saw the face of Max. The avalanche stopped. Max pulled him to safety.

Kingi couldnt hang on much longer. He was hanging of a cliff his arms shaking and his fingers about to let go soon and fall thousonds of meters down. Kingi could feel he was about to give up and let go but he held on..... Then Kingi looked up and saw max he helped him up and they were never to be seen again.

By: Leche

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