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Sunday, 18 May 2014

persuasive writing - Silver Ferns Game

GOAL!!! The Silver Ferns just scored a GOAL in a game there playing and they score another GOAL everybody cheers as the Silver Ferns are WINNING the game. At the moment the score is 10 - 5 the Silver Ferns have 10 and the other team have 5 GOAL the Silver Ferns just scored another GOAL. Oh no the other team just scored a GOAL now the score is 12 - 6. Everybody is cheering for the Silver Ferns and only  about 35 people in the stadium are cheering for the other team. Its half time now and the Silver Ferns just scored a GOAL. Now the other team has the ball they pasted it to a member and a Silver Fern got the ball. Silver ferns just scored another GOAL. Now the score is 14 - 6 the Silver Ferns are WINNING 20 minutes to go till the end who will win. GOAL and another GOAL from the Silver Ferns with 10 minutes left. The score is 16 - 6 the other team has to score 10 or a 11 or 12 to win. With 5 minutes left in the game whos going to win the game. GOAL, GOAL, GOAL, GOAL, GOAL from the Silver ferns wow now the score is 21 - 6. 1 minute left the Silver Ferns are WINNING the 10 second count down has started. The Silver Ferns just scored 5 more GOALS. The score is now what the other team just scored a GOAL. The score now is 26 - 7 and it now is game OVER.


BY : MAKAYLA

1 comment:

  1. Go the Silver Ferns! Even if I do prefer the All Blacks (-:

    Kylie
    Makayla's Mum

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